Well that was quite boring . And that french part hurt my eyes so messed up.

Totally agree on the French parts. It's a good idea to try using a foreign language now and then, but please ask a native for their opinion! Syntax was weird at the least, and some sentences just didn't make any sense. And sorry for my English... I'm French LOL. Also I found the story weak, I read it because I enjoyed Dekiai no ori.

Ikr! Even though french is not my native language but it's my second so yea they should have done some better research .