I really liked it

Kisaki August 1, 2017 2:38 am

It was kinda twisted at the beginning but surprisingly I really liked it, although I wish the story developed more to the point where Take and Mine's relationship were equally as good as Hiroi and Mine's. I know each person is different so relationships are different between them but for some reason in yaoi threesomes there's always this kind of unbalance. I wish there were a story where all three of them were in love with each other and not just two people sharing one person

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    Mikki August 3, 2017 9:39 am

    If you think about it they all do love each other in the end, Take and Mine aren't just as loveydovey. I think fighting would kinda be their thing, they definitely treat each other better then the beginning too. :>

    Kisaki August 3, 2017 10:24 am
    If you think about it they all do love each other in the end, Take and Mine aren't just as loveydovey. I think fighting would kinda be their thing, they definitely treat each other better then the beginning too... Mikki

    Yeah, I know but it's just not shown clearly, that's what I meant. I mean, Take did say it clearly to Hiroi that he liked Mine and Mine did admit to himself that he didn't hate Take and would even kiss him when greeting him but they don't know each other's feelings. They each still think they are being hated and barely tolerated. Also, when I said "in love with each other" I meant all three of them. Take and Hiroi aren't in love, they are part of each other but not in love with each other.

    Mikki August 3, 2017 10:54 am
    Yeah, I know but it's just not shown clearly, that's what I meant. I mean, Take did say it clearly to Hiroi that he liked Mine and Mine did admit to himself that he didn't hate Take and would even kiss him when... Kisaki

    Ahh, I thought that's what you meant but I didn't know for sure if that's what you meant. I get it, if they love each other like love, did you want them also to have sex with each other or just be the same as it is now?

    Kisaki August 4, 2017 1:32 am
    Ahh, I thought that's what you meant but I didn't know for sure if that's what you meant. I get it, if they love each other like love, did you want them also to have sex with each other or just be the same as i... Mikki

    Well, for this story I guess I'd be satisfied as long as Take and Mine knew they loved each other. It's even fine if they keep bickering since that's their thing, as long as they know each other's feelings. Hiroi and Take are fine the way they are since that's how it is in this story, but I'd like more yaoi threesome stories where all three are in love with each other instead of two people in love with the same person and deciding to share him.