story fell flat. the first few chapters were quite interesting, it was a story about a suc...

gay _penguins July 20, 2017 4:10 am

story fell flat. the first few chapters were quite interesting, it was a story about a succubus/incubus trying to lose his virginity to a cold hearted guy, but as the story progresses, i couldnt gasp the situation. i didnt even know what was going on. the ending was disappointing. we find out that he had to be reincarnated (?) or something, which was confusing because it didn't seem like they explained anything about that until the end. then he comes back and hes a human who doesnt remember anything. if you think about it, is it really him though? if he was going to be reincarnated, he would be reborn as a baby, not as a highschooler. so in technicality, would misaki just be a look a like?

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    Sachiko July 20, 2017 12:56 pm

    Um but why does he forget his mother then? Different types of reincarnation too. T.

    gay _penguins July 20, 2017 9:16 pm
    Um but why does he forget his mother then? Different types of reincarnation too. T. Sachiko

    reincarnation is starting a new life, which means being reborn again it wouldnt make sense for him to be reborn as a higschooler, because he has a family, a mom and a dad. if he was reborn as a higschooler does that mean his mom and dad were created out of thin air with a son? no he has a past as a kid, but he just doesn't remember it. either its a look a like or his soul went into misaki's body when he died. this story has a lot of plot holes.

    justme July 23, 2017 11:19 pm

    i think it's with the latter idea. his soul went into the high schoolers. BUT the same looks and everything really doesn't make sense. that high schooler had a life so even if his soul went in, made him forget about his parents/life, the looks of the kid shouldn't change into that of the incubus. if we say that they do have the same looks then that meant while the incubus was out and about with the seme, the high schooler also existed at the same time. it all doesn't make sense. plot holes INDEED. it would have made more sense if the story said 18 years later and misaki showed up again while seme is already in his mid 30's to 40's. age gap but it makes more sense. at least then it's actual reincarnation where the incubus was reborn into a new human body with the same looks.

    gay _penguins July 24, 2017 2:10 am
    i think it's with the latter idea. his soul went into the high schoolers. BUT the same looks and everything really doesn't make sense. that high schooler had a life so even if his soul went in, made him forget ... justme

    EXACTLY. good story idea, bad execution. i mean didn't the artist's editor say anything?