Development

Yammy July 3, 2017 3:22 am

I like the direction the story is going; former classmates meeting up after some years, crossing paths again through the father's kid. Its got a certain amount of fluff I like without feeling rushed but mature and easy to appreciate by allowing us to slowly get to know the characters. The twist in the story was surprising too and not at all obvious, making it completely natural and smooth in its story-telling.
I've always been fascinated by BL parent stories but some of its focus is diverted, messy, or follows a similar pattern. Sometimes coming across as annoying characters or offering too much drama. This one shows potential as the father is struggling with raising a child and must change his lifestyle to care and build a relationship with this son through the help of his old classmate and son's Sensei. I cannot wait to see how they will all come together as a sweet family in the end so I am ecstatic about this reading experience.
It's so nice to see similar BL parent stories and I hope to see more this one updated. Thank you staff for sharing this piece!

Responses
    BakaButler July 3, 2017 12:59 am

    You appear to be a good judge of story and character development, as an aspiring Author, I can appreciate this greatly. Keep up the good work!