It was cute! The character designs were peak and the setting was awesome as well! The plot had issues tho T^T like ao being full traumatized made a lot of sense! I don’t agree though with asuka apologizing to the gang? Like I understand he had to do it in a way but we should have gotten a bit more emotional hate from him because they literally beat up aos father, trashed the restaurant, kidnapped ao, tried to rape him, threatened to traffic ao AND HIS LITTLE SISTERS and everyone is just like brushing that off? There just seemed to not be enough emotional depth to the situation revolving gangs. It’s understandable tho for a short story but I think if your doing a short story then don’t put such a heavy conflict in there :(
I also died at the “I’m not gay” and then proceeds to have gay sex. Bl authors please realize that bisexuality, pansexuality, unlabeled, or just queer exists ToT
It was cute! The character designs were peak and the setting was awesome as well! The plot had issues tho T^T like ao being full traumatized made a lot of sense! I don’t agree though with asuka apologizing to the gang? Like I understand he had to do it in a way but we should have gotten a bit more emotional hate from him because they literally beat up aos father, trashed the restaurant, kidnapped ao, tried to rape him, threatened to traffic ao AND HIS LITTLE SISTERS and everyone is just like brushing that off? There just seemed to not be enough emotional depth to the situation revolving gangs. It’s understandable tho for a short story but I think if your doing a short story then don’t put such a heavy conflict in there :(
I also died at the “I’m not gay” and then proceeds to have gay sex. Bl authors please realize that bisexuality, pansexuality, unlabeled, or just queer exists ToT