The plot feels a bit disorganized, I wish it was longer so there could've been more panels/time to properly develop their relationship. The SA scene felt like it got used as a plot device so they can have sex, I hated it. I've seen reviews saying that they hate Sigmund for blaming Brunhild after getting SA'd, but I'd say the creator could've just gone through with this story without that scene instead of shoving it down the throats of both the leads and the readers. It pissed me off too when even Brunhild was made to just gloss over it because what ended up being the main focus of the interaction was the sex afterwards.
Overall, it's cute. However, the more you try to think about it, the more you'll see the plot holes with the weak worldbuilding it has. But most of these problems could've been solved if this was longer, and the creator had more time to build the narrative instead of just doing time skips towards the end.
The plot feels a bit disorganized, I wish it was longer so there could've been more panels/time to properly develop their relationship. The SA scene felt like it got used as a plot device so they can have sex, I hated it. I've seen reviews saying that they hate Sigmund for blaming Brunhild after getting SA'd, but I'd say the creator could've just gone through with this story without that scene instead of shoving it down the throats of both the leads and the readers. It pissed me off too when even Brunhild was made to just gloss over it because what ended up being the main focus of the interaction was the sex afterwards.
Overall, it's cute. However, the more you try to think about it, the more you'll see the plot holes with the weak worldbuilding it has. But most of these problems could've been solved if this was longer, and the creator had more time to build the narrative instead of just doing time skips towards the end.