Responses
This is EXACTLY what it lacked. Yes yes yes. Very good point
Right? I mean yes I had fun reading it. The plot and characters was enjoyable to read as the time goes by but deep down, in my preferences, it lacked something which is the MLS POV.
No, because for me, it lacked something important. We never really have the MLS POV as to how he liked MC. It felt rush, their relationship, and MLS confession. It was a nice read but yea for me, Ml should have his own POV, he did have but it was not enough.