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Also, the story is making it all about her. I know it is her story, but you throw in that a bunch of children have been drugged in milk and then I’m just focusing on that! Show the kids! The audience doesn’t care about your garden when you just told us the children are being drugged and forced to using. I don’t know, the fruit version of fentanyl.
Oh come on. There's a gardener in every story and no one noticed poisonous berries there? This story just makes no sense sometimes