The bottom. Why. You walked into a room full of stalking pictures while the stalker is IN THE HOUSE and you didn't think to watch your back? My guy
I get the whole "he's still a child who cries and worries easily in my eyes" perspective so you don't wanna rely on your lover but does that mean you make a dumb decision and walk into the stalkers home without so much as a TINY BIT of awareness? I was in disbelief he just casually started walking around like he was in a museum lmao.
Anyway, overall it was a decent read. The stalking thing came out of left field and I wasnt really into it. Is there ever a story where a rando guy shows up and he's not gonna cause trouble? Giving how green this story was and how soft it was going, I kinda expected it to stay refreshing. Maybe the the new guy becomes a genuine friend. Maybe he had personal problems and moved out to the country side, and they bond over relationships and self improvement (like it makes bottom also read his perspective toward the top) and he grows confidence in himself or smth. Something soft like that, like how the story began. But nope, it just turned into another typical third act antagonist.
The story is perfect length. Not too long and the story doesn't drag.
The bottom.
Why.
You walked into a room full of stalking pictures while the stalker is IN THE HOUSE and you didn't think to watch your back? My guy
I get the whole "he's still a child who cries and worries easily in my eyes" perspective so you don't wanna rely on your lover but does that mean you make a dumb decision and walk into the stalkers home without so much as a TINY BIT of awareness? I was in disbelief he just casually started walking around like he was in a museum lmao.
Anyway, overall it was a decent read. The stalking thing came out of left field and I wasnt really into it. Is there ever a story where a rando guy shows up and he's not gonna cause trouble? Giving how green this story was and how soft it was going, I kinda expected it to stay refreshing. Maybe the the new guy becomes a genuine friend. Maybe he had personal problems and moved out to the country side, and they bond over relationships and self improvement (like it makes bottom also read his perspective toward the top) and he grows confidence in himself or smth. Something soft like that, like how the story began. But nope, it just turned into another typical third act antagonist.
The story is perfect length. Not too long and the story doesn't drag.