The story pacing is kinda weird, first few chapters are pretty coherent but then BOOM the ...

Pangeep April 24, 2025 8:33 am

The story pacing is kinda weird, first few chapters are pretty coherent but then BOOM the sudden jumps and big amount of story lines, that are there for only 3 panels, is actually crazy. Not to mention the inconsistent behavior of ML that is making me even more confused. I understand that author tried to make him somehow contradictory in nature, but it didn't work out in this case. At all. There is still few things that are pleasant (like some plots, and most of them should become more relevant to the story)
P.S. The bestiality mentions and rape didn't bring anything valuable either

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