The narration

anake_hg April 15, 2025 12:19 pm

The way the author describes swimming through the mc is so amazing. I was a swimmer since I was kid, of course never got farther than high school, but I get what he means when he talks about he feels when he is swimming.

For me it was the feeling of being underwater and not hearing a single sound, it’s a surreal feeling to say in the least. The other part was that swimming was the only time I didn’t have to think about anything. The silence was so calming and I could focus on was the feeling of the water.

I really miss it, I haven’t actually swam since I was 17 cause I was diagnosed with epilepsy and now absolutely terrified to be in bodies of water.

Responses
    Wave the lightsabers April 15, 2025 2:02 pm

    I know right, i cried a bit at that chapter, it just made me remember how many times I cried because of regret in quitting swimming

    anake_hg April 16, 2025 3:12 pm
    I know right, i cried a bit at that chapter, it just made me remember how many times I cried because of regret in quitting swimming Wave the lightsabers

    loui37 April 18, 2025 2:53 pm

    Aw so sad that happened to you... it must be hard to be scared now with something you used to loge and enjoy...

    loui37 April 18, 2025 2:53 pm
    Aw so sad that happened to you... it must be hard to be scared now with something you used to loge and enjoy... loui37

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