This is so corny. ml is a manwhore but author wrote it as if thats what makes him hot, mc ...

This is so corny. ml is a manwhore but author wrote it as if thats what makes him hot, mc cant even make up his mind, indecisive or whipped? Pick a struggle. Mc says all this shit about leaving him but then reveals the truth about him being the dad before running away, doesn’t even fight when he gets caught, easily accepts ml just because he gave you butterflies with one sentence LMFAOOOO This would have been bearable if mc slept around too for all i care, commit to being a mess of a story. This is written like a damn wattpad story