The first chapter is ok yeah its good its fun to read but the "almost last chapters" that aint cool bro manipulation? Murder? Deceiver damn, he literally need to grow up with a father figure to figure everything he did, the table have turns tho, i hope he change now i mean character development (MORE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT NOT JUST character development) but it ended, i hope he gotten nicer and better
The first chapter is ok yeah its good its fun to read but the "almost last chapters" that aint cool bro manipulation? Murder? Deceiver damn, he literally need to grow up with a father figure to figure everything he did, the table have turns tho, i hope he change now i mean character development (MORE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT NOT JUST character development) but it ended, i hope he gotten nicer and better