Also uhhh can I ask wassup with the donut lips on Ragnarok's bat form. He's the only person with melanin thus far, so, uh it ain't looking pretty...
I was js thinkin that!! Like it's a bit iffy
The storyline is confusing bcs we're seeing her pov. She's confused on what's going on with her "world" now
Not really, the storytelling is just convoluted. It doesn't have anything to do with the "lack of information from her POV", it's just the way the story is told that sucks. I can see there is a lot of stuff being saved for payoff later rn and I'm happy the one in charge of the storybeats is ambitious... but there's a lot of stuff here that just doesn't work and tbh I'd rather get a proper story flow than an ambitious one seeing as we're still only 14 chapters in
My bad im very sleepy writing that comment i probably forgot to add more words so my statement make sense but i forgot what it was. I feel like the author is edging? us to ask more questions or somethings like. Idk how to explain it properly bcs english isn't my first language but third.
Yeah, I think I know what you mean, I'm waiting to see if it pays off in the end but until then it's gonna be a pretty annoying lol
Art is nice and the character design is really cool. The storytelling is as confusing as can be but idc honestly I just hope they have lotsa hot sex