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They're dragging so much! I get your trying to set up the characters and places but it's 37 chapters in and we now just find out about the brother. Taking too long and this chapter felt smaller than the rest
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They're dragging so much! I get your trying to set up the characters and places but it's 37 chapters in and we now just find out about the brother. Taking too long and this chapter felt smaller than the rest
chat i need more movement with her revenge towards the "heroes". LIKE GIVE ME SOME ACTUAL PLOT