I don't care what anyone says I still hate jk and I think this story is badly written the ...

Blossom49 April 12, 2025 10:50 pm

I don't care what anyone says I still hate jk and I think this story is badly written the fact the author had to copy BJ Alex I think it's ch63 I don't know the chapter in BJ Alex and I'm too lazy to check but if you've read bj Alex then u probably had flashbacks like I did why I feel like the story is badly written is because of jk his bad yes but apart from his jinx it's never explained to us why his himself or why he likes boxing so much he doesn't just treat Dan like trash he treats everyone like trash and we are supposed to feel bad for him when people abandon him? This being a romance is another thing Dan is not in a state of mind to fall in love and I don't think jk is capable of falling in love let's be real I hate their sex scenes so much I can't shake the feeling that jk is the only that enjoys it and Dan just having sex to get it over with or forget even now jk is thinking about boxing I know deep down he wants Dan but it's not done in a way I would root for him especially when Dan is going through it with his Grandma his only family dying before his eye and his realising that if she dies he'll be all alone and that's heart wrenching! I thought he was foolish with his yes sir attitude and the way he liked that dick jk even after he treated him like dirt but now I just feel bad for him like jk is not someone Dan needs they both have their own problems and I don't think it's a case of we are both messed up so we better stay together type shit it's a we need to go our seperate ways and find ourselves maybe it's not bad writing but I don't know what to call it then

Responses
    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 10:56 pm

    Why are you still reading if you hate this this much ?

    Jjk is definitely changing but y'all want him to change overnight which is impossible.

    There's small changes and the author said herself that she'll reveal Jjk backstory.

    If you hate this, stop reading it. Don't give yourself unnecessary headache

    Vans April 12, 2025 10:56 pm

    Bro shut up r u the one writing the story no u aren't so shut ur ass up and let the author do their thing plus what's wrong with getting inspo from one of ur old projects

    koko April 12, 2025 10:58 pm
    Why are you still reading if you hate this this much ?Jjk is definitely changing but y'all want him to change overnight which is impossible.There's small changes and the author said herself that she'll reveal J... Imjustagirl

    omg an actual smart person, i hope both sides of your pillows are cold (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    Blossom49 April 12, 2025 11:01 pm
    Why are you still reading if you hate this this much ?Jjk is definitely changing but y'all want him to change overnight which is impossible.There's small changes and the author said herself that she'll reveal J... Imjustagirl

    I'll read it and I'll say what I feel if u don't like it u can go and hang yourself

    Blossom49 April 12, 2025 11:05 pm
    Bro shut up r u the one writing the story no u aren't so shut ur ass up and let the author do their thing plus what's wrong with getting inspo from one of ur old projects Vans

    Go and hug transformer because I don't give a fuck u can get inspo but for it to feel like I've read it before it's just copy and paste to me I felt like that and that's why I said it if u don't like what I said Goan break dance under the rain for days maybe then I'll give a fuck

    koko April 12, 2025 11:09 pm

    honestly, keep complaining, the story isn’t gonna go how you want anyways so keep being mad lol ლ(´ڡ`ლ)

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:10 pm
    I'll read it and I'll say what I feel if u don't like it u can go and hang yourself Blossom49

    It seems like you lack of emotional intelligence and you sound a bit dumb.

    This is literally embarrassing :'(

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:12 pm
    omg an actual smart person, i hope both sides of your pillows are cold (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ koko

    Thank u. Wish you the same

    Blossom49 April 12, 2025 11:17 pm
    Why are you still reading if you hate this this much ?Jjk is definitely changing but y'all want him to change overnight which is impossible.There's small changes and the author said herself that she'll reveal J... Imjustagirl

    Him changing does not change the fact his a horrible piece of shit I'll keep reading it and I'll keep saying how I feel not everyone is gonna like it and clap for the story like it's able to win an oscar or something people can read it and not like it too

    koko April 12, 2025 11:24 pm
    Him changing does not change the fact his a horrible piece of shit I'll keep reading it and I'll keep saying how I feel not everyone is gonna like it and clap for the story like it's able to win an oscar or som... Blossom49

    um… that’s what character development means… it means change, which is what’s happening, it’s literally a slow burn but you’re probably too slow and uneducated to know that so i wish you the best help you can.

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:28 pm
    Him changing does not change the fact his a horrible piece of shit I'll keep reading it and I'll keep saying how I feel not everyone is gonna like it and clap for the story like it's able to win an oscar or som... Blossom49

    Did I said otherwise tho ?

    I just gave you an advice. I advised you to rest and stop reading something you clearly hate. It's unnecessary and it's not like your opinion would matter.

    You're literally torturing yourself :(

    Blossom49 April 12, 2025 11:32 pm
    It seems like you lack of emotional intelligence and you sound a bit dumb.This is literally embarrassing :'( Imjustagirl

    you're literally attacking me for having a different opinion from u now you're saying I'm dumb and lack emotional intelligence it's like u need to look in the mirror because I'm not the one riding jk dick a fictional character like my life demands on it bro is a fictional story I can say how I feel you lack the brains to comprehend that not everyone is gonna like or accept the things u like, like wtf grow up please

    That'sweird April 12, 2025 11:36 pm

    lmao gurl who pissed on ur junk?

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:36 pm
    you're literally attacking me for having a different opinion from u now you're saying I'm dumb and lack emotional intelligence it's like u need to look in the mirror because I'm not the one riding jk dick a fic... Blossom49

    Erm no ? I gave you an advice (bc I know how bad reading things you hate can be bad for your mental health.) but you told me to "hang myself" :'0

    Blossom49 April 12, 2025 11:43 pm
    Did I said otherwise tho ? I just gave you an advice. I advised you to rest and stop reading something you clearly hate. It's unnecessary and it's not like your opinion would matter.You're literally torturing y... Imjustagirl

    You're beyond stupid if you think u can tell me what to do and I'm telling u I'll read it next week and if I feel some type of way I'll still say how I feel and the week after that too senseless he-goat

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:53 pm
    You're beyond stupid if you think u can tell me what to do and I'm telling u I'll read it next week and if I feel some type of way I'll still say how I feel and the week after that too senseless he-goat Blossom49

    My bad I didn't know I'd fell on someone this dumb and emotionally unintelligent :'(

    I don't know who hurt you but heal, my child. You definitely need it :')

    Blossom49 April 12, 2025 11:55 pm
    um… that’s what character development means… it means change, which is what’s happening, it’s literally a slow burn but you’re probably too slow and uneducated to know that so i wish you the best he... koko

    I have an idea since your so smart and wise why don't u make your own post

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:57 pm

    Oh and I wasn't asking you to do what I said. It was just an advice but I guess your stupid dumbass brain wouldn't understand it since you have understanding issues :(

    Last advice : don't tell people to "hang themselves" it's insensitive and cruel (hope you can understand this. If you can't, I can try to make it more easier to understand I love helping ppl who have undeveloped brain )

    Imjustagirl April 12, 2025 11:59 pm
    um… that’s what character development means… it means change, which is what’s happening, it’s literally a slow burn but you’re probably too slow and uneducated to know that so i wish you the best he... koko

    Let me explain to you, this person is kinda dumb and have a small brain so it's a bit complicated for them to understand us. It's sad, right ? :(

    koko April 13, 2025 12:01 am
    Let me explain to you, this person is kinda dumb and have a small brain so it's a bit complicated for them to understand us. It's sad, right ? :( Imjustagirl

    oooooh i understand i understand, it’s very depressing lol but thank you for reminding me girly (๑•ㅂ•)و✧