1. Mommy is very pretty (the litteral mommy not lippe) 2. NO ONE in this story looks 15 and the girls are supposed to be. The guys look 25 and the girls look 18-20. Make it make sense. 3. The story would've been better if the entire period where she was 12 was eliminated. 4. The art is good but doesn’t save the story's loss. 5. Lippe isn’t all that for everyone boy and girl adult and child to be obsessed with her
1. Mommy is very pretty (the litteral mommy not lippe)
2. NO ONE in this story looks 15 and the girls are supposed to be. The guys look 25 and the girls look 18-20. Make it make sense.
3. The story would've been better if the entire period where she was 12 was eliminated.
4. The art is good but doesn’t save the story's loss.
5. Lippe isn’t all that for everyone boy and girl adult and child to be obsessed with her