Half of my comment got chopped off but that’s fine
They could have made the scene so much more better if they maybe had him tilt his head to the side a bit and his other hand underneath the hand he was holding the gun. I’m sure killing a group of people would be quite hard with just a single gun. The author might be a newbie at this so I’m not angry at them. It just wasn’t as satisfying to read.
I love the artstyle, it’s messy but refreshing. I love love the plot, it is seriously so interesting but it’s just really rushed. I also like how they aren’t making the love interest obvious, I really hope it’s Rohan and not Risky. I’m sorry to Risky lovers out there but something abt him puts me off. I’m usually into the black and red flags in stories like this but he’s just not it. It might be the cringey dialogue or the funny poses, but I hope the MC ends up with Rohan and not Risky.
This gets a 6.5/10
Hopefully the second season won’t be as cringey as the first and I really hope that they fix the funny poses.
I also read some of the comments below me and I hope the MC isn’t using Rohan as a replacement cuz he still has feelings for Risky. If that is the case I am going to cry, Rohan is such a sweetheart and just so cute.
I have read my fair share of toxic yaois, along with love triangles, this in a way was bad and good? It had some good and bad stuff. It felt really rushed, some of the scenes were just not it the way they hold the guns and the fighting scenes make me giggle. The plot is very straightforward and there were some scenes that made me go “ok damn that’s crazy” but it is the plot that makes it feel really rushed.
The plot is mainly the reason why it feels rushed. I feel like it’s just going too quick, and we missed some amazing character development. For example, the MC changed so much after he was saved by Rohan, we could have been shown at least a few scenes of is development but we got nothing. I kinda hoped they would make their childhood flashbacks a bit longer, but it’s fine. Sometimes the flashbacks don’t have to be that important , and that’s the case with this yaoi. This mainly focuses on the present and not the past.
Again, the poses… oh my gosh, don’t get me started. The poses made me laugh so hard. The way they hold their guns is not it. I understand it’s cool to hold a gun with one hand but can’t you make the scene a bit more pleasing or satisfactory? The scene where Rohan came in to save MC from almost getting raped by the dudes that found him in the river, the way he held the gun was funny. He was just standing there like this