Mild spoilers, skip to last bracket of text to avoid them and get the gist of issues.
The base story is really good, it's much more interesting and pleasant than 90% of the shitty Omegaverse plots we see out there, but at chapter 3 to 4 already things just got WAY too rushed. Them just getting it on and the villain showing up, making that decision and getting together because suddenly love(?) is a thing, was just way to random, rushed and not well thought out. I mean, he literally went from 'ew, homos are gross!' to 'i wanna be with you no matter what!' within half a chapter basically. It felt like a rough script rather than that being transformed into a story with a flow. Which really ruined it for me. It could have been amazing if it had been given time to develope naturally and at a good pace. :( I get throwing in the angst of the incest aspect, but that's something I only find non-disgusting BEFORE they fuck and potentially have an inbred baby on the way. So that wasn't exactly a plus point for the story either. XD The entire human trafficking plot is really interesting and definitely worth spending time on when writing. But even that aspect felt a bit rushed at times, or just jumbled. Not sure tho, as this could be due to how the chapters were uploaded. Some seem to have the pages not quite in correct order.
Don't get me wrong, the writing at it's core and many dialogue/monologue moments are great, but it just didn't get enough time to let the story itself unfold naturally and as smoothly as it could have been. I would still recommend it, but with there being issues you need to prepare for. Pacing/it being rushed too much, mainly. The story is interesting and nice, so it depends on how your personal standard for flow and writing is. Some may find it bothersome, others not so much. I like it for what it is at it's core, tho it could have been much better. Fingers crossed we'll see more of these non-rape/smut infested Omegaverse stories and actually see comics with an actual PLOT. This one is definetly a good example of how to do it, if we only view the overall story aspect itself.
Mild spoilers, skip to last bracket of text to avoid them and get the gist of issues.
The base story is really good, it's much more interesting and pleasant than 90% of the shitty Omegaverse plots we see out there, but at chapter 3 to 4 already things just got WAY too rushed.
Them just getting it on and the villain showing up, making that decision and getting together because suddenly love(?) is a thing, was just way to random, rushed and not well thought out. I mean, he literally went from 'ew, homos are gross!' to 'i wanna be with you no matter what!' within half a chapter basically. It felt like a rough script rather than that being transformed into a story with a flow. Which really ruined it for me. It could have been amazing if it had been given time to develope naturally and at a good pace. :(
I get throwing in the angst of the incest aspect, but that's something I only find non-disgusting BEFORE they fuck and potentially have an inbred baby on the way. So that wasn't exactly a plus point for the story either. XD
The entire human trafficking plot is really interesting and definitely worth spending time on when writing. But even that aspect felt a bit rushed at times, or just jumbled. Not sure tho, as this could be due to how the chapters were uploaded. Some seem to have the pages not quite in correct order.
Don't get me wrong, the writing at it's core and many dialogue/monologue moments are great, but it just didn't get enough time to let the story itself unfold naturally and as smoothly as it could have been.
I would still recommend it, but with there being issues you need to prepare for. Pacing/it being rushed too much, mainly.
The story is interesting and nice, so it depends on how your personal standard for flow and writing is. Some may find it bothersome, others not so much.
I like it for what it is at it's core, tho it could have been much better.
Fingers crossed we'll see more of these non-rape/smut infested Omegaverse stories and actually see comics with an actual PLOT. This one is definetly a good example of how to do it, if we only view the overall story aspect itself.