S2 and still not discovered while being under his nose with only a veil... Sigh this autho...

Meruemshu April 11, 2025 4:48 am

S2 and still not discovered while being under his nose with only a veil... Sigh this author has decided to drag the story with a fake mystery. I'm gonna wait it out

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    Desgod April 11, 2025 5:54 am

    ( ̄へ ̄)Same. I really dislike plots that rely on a misunderstanding or whatever for drama. Especially such a dumb, drawn out, unnecessary one like this story has.

    Meruemshu April 11, 2025 7:10 am
    ( ̄へ ̄)Same. I really dislike plots that rely on a misunderstanding or whatever for drama. Especially such a dumb, drawn out, unnecessary one like this story has. Desgod

    OMG SOMEONE WHO GETS IT. IT'S SUCH ANNOYING BAD WRITING

    Urim April 11, 2025 11:22 pm

    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and grew hair....down there....

    Urim April 11, 2025 11:24 pm
    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and ... Urim

    Not to mention, Mc is trying to make sure ml doesn't recognize him.

    Desgod April 12, 2025 12:07 am
    Not to mention, Mc is trying to make sure ml doesn't recognize him. Urim

    This is the part that is so unnecessary.
    MC knows he could solve both their problems and get revenge on his completely vile birth family in one fell swoop.
    BUT nooooooooo dummy has too much cum and alcohol in his brain to connect those dots.
    Plus, MC isn’t slick so he’s just coming across as SUS to those that could be his ally in this situation.

    Meruemshu April 12, 2025 4:01 pm
    This is the part that is so unnecessary. MC knows he could solve both their problems and get revenge on his completely vile birth family in one fell swoop. BUT nooooooooo dummy has too much cum and alcohol in h... Desgod

    Exactly, this is fucking ridiculous

    Meruemshu April 12, 2025 4:07 pm
    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and ... Urim

    "Honey", he has seen him naked. Fully naked and taken him in several positions. There's more to a body than pubic hair. He has the same hair length, the same haircut, the same body, and if the veil didn't matter then the author wouldnt have made it the heart of the mystery. I'm not the one who said that the key element in hiding his identity was the veil, the author is. And you know why? Because it's bad writing.

    I know you want to be a " kind reader" and try to be understanding by coming up with explanation that the author themselves isn't giving, but from my 13 years if experience reading BL, I can tell you know it's genuinely judst that shitty veil. And you'll see that I'm right I'm the "grand reveal". You'll be greatly disappointed but at least next time you'll be able to predict the story better.

    Meruemshu April 12, 2025 4:09 pm
    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and ... Urim

    You can stay "pretty sure", the story itself will prove you wrong, so I won't add anything because that's the type of analysis learning that you can only get by failing to predict, like you are right now.
    Have a good reading, I'll just wait it out.

    Urim April 14, 2025 11:20 am
    "Honey", he has seen him naked. Fully naked and taken him in several positions. There's more to a body than pubic hair. He has the same hair length, the same haircut, the same body, and if the veil didn't matte... Meruemshu

    Well, quite the little outburst you had there, didn't you? And what, you have problem with being called "honey"? Then, is "darling" better?

    And of course I'm bringing up explanation for it bcuz I'm reading the story, not judging it like you with ur "13 years of experience", if u say that, how many master pieces might have u already read? Why are you comparing this one story to something it isn't?

    And the not recognizing thing? That's literally the plot isn't it? Why did you read something if u don't like the plot itself??

    To say the story is the best? No it certainly isn't, of course. But shouldn't u with all that experience of urs be able to know better then others?

    I never said the story was sooooo good, I just wrote what had happened in the story itself.

    But boy u are writing like I offended ur family tree or something.

    Anyways, that's my opinion, and u can have urs, if the story is so bad don't read it, I hope u have a good day/night, darling.

    Urim April 14, 2025 11:31 am
    You can stay "pretty sure", the story itself will prove you wrong, so I won't add anything because that's the type of analysis learning that you can only get by failing to predict, like you are right now. Have ... Meruemshu

    And analysis learning? What do u think this is? A true crime documentary? No, it's not, it's a story about fictional characters that don't exist, if u didn't know, and this is outright an overused plot,
    And there is no way this story can prove me wrong bcuz I'm not the one getting angry at literally nothing, I wanna enjoy the story from the author's perspective, not compare it to something like, heaven's official blessing or the untamed. Bcuz u speak of soooo much experience u should have read them.

    Urim April 14, 2025 11:34 am
    "Honey", he has seen him naked. Fully naked and taken him in several positions. There's more to a body than pubic hair. He has the same hair length, the same haircut, the same body, and if the veil didn't matte... Meruemshu

    And you talk naked as if the ml is supposed to remember all the kinds of hole his thing has been inside, that's absurd, and this is a martial arts manwha, most of the character are buff wdym!?!???

    Meruemshu April 14, 2025 11:42 am
    Well, quite the little outburst you had there, didn't you? And what, you have problem with being called "honey"? Then, is "darling" better? And of course I'm bringing up explanation for it bcuz I'm reading the ... Urim

    1. "Honey" is cool and all until it's completely devoid of kindness so keep your honey to yourself.

    2. We're both reading the story, you simply have no pattern recognition skill. It has nothing to do with reading masterpieces, you're losing track.

    3. You don't understand the difference between the concept of plot and trope, so I will let you do some education by researching that.

    4. I know better than you, indeed.

    5. What you wrote didn't happen in the story you literally made up something, in the "story itself" the veil hides the big mystery.

    6. If you had offended my family I wouldn't have been so polite and patient.

    7. The story was great until the shitty fake mystery trope which is exactly why I'm waiting it out, get some comprehension skills, darling.

    Meruemshu April 14, 2025 11:42 am
    And analysis learning? What do u think this is? A true crime documentary? No, it's not, it's a story about fictional characters that don't exist, if u didn't know, and this is outright an overused plot,And ther... Urim

    As I said you have no comprehension skills, no pattern recognition skills and you have no experience reading to judge the quality of the story so I'm not even gonna debate with your ignorance.

    Meruemshu April 14, 2025 11:43 am
    And you talk naked as if the ml is supposed to remember all the kinds of hole his thing has been inside, that's absurd, and this is a martial arts manwha, most of the character are buff wdym!?!??? Urim

    If you have never had sex with anyone or just have the memory of a goldfish just say that. Bye.