S2 and still not discovered while being under his nose with only a veil... Sigh this autho...

Meruemshu April 11, 2025 4:48 am

S2 and still not discovered while being under his nose with only a veil... Sigh this author has decided to drag the story with a fake mystery. I'm gonna wait it out

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    Desgod April 11, 2025 5:54 am

    ( ̄へ ̄)Same. I really dislike plots that rely on a misunderstanding or whatever for drama. Especially such a dumb, drawn out, unnecessary one like this story has.

    Meruemshu April 11, 2025 7:10 am
    ( ̄へ ̄)Same. I really dislike plots that rely on a misunderstanding or whatever for drama. Especially such a dumb, drawn out, unnecessary one like this story has. Desgod

    OMG SOMEONE WHO GETS IT. IT'S SUCH ANNOYING BAD WRITING

    Urim April 11, 2025 11:22 pm

    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and grew hair....down there....

    Urim April 11, 2025 11:24 pm
    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and ... Urim

    Not to mention, Mc is trying to make sure ml doesn't recognize him.

    Desgod April 12, 2025 12:07 am
    Not to mention, Mc is trying to make sure ml doesn't recognize him. Urim

    This is the part that is so unnecessary.
    MC knows he could solve both their problems and get revenge on his completely vile birth family in one fell swoop.
    BUT nooooooooo dummy has too much cum and alcohol in his brain to connect those dots.
    Plus, MC isn’t slick so he’s just coming across as SUS to those that could be his ally in this situation.

    Meruemshu April 12, 2025 4:01 pm
    This is the part that is so unnecessary. MC knows he could solve both their problems and get revenge on his completely vile birth family in one fell swoop. BUT nooooooooo dummy has too much cum and alcohol in h... Desgod

    Exactly, this is fucking ridiculous

    Meruemshu April 12, 2025 4:07 pm
    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and ... Urim

    "Honey", he has seen him naked. Fully naked and taken him in several positions. There's more to a body than pubic hair. He has the same hair length, the same haircut, the same body, and if the veil didn't matter then the author wouldnt have made it the heart of the mystery. I'm not the one who said that the key element in hiding his identity was the veil, the author is. And you know why? Because it's bad writing.

    I know you want to be a " kind reader" and try to be understanding by coming up with explanation that the author themselves isn't giving, but from my 13 years if experience reading BL, I can tell you know it's genuinely judst that shitty veil. And you'll see that I'm right I'm the "grand reveal". You'll be greatly disappointed but at least next time you'll be able to predict the story better.

    Meruemshu April 12, 2025 4:09 pm
    Honey, I'm pretty sure it's not the veil, the ml never got to see mcs face, he only knows that Mc has that "negative energy something" and hairless down there. But here he's hiding his "negative something" and ... Urim

    You can stay "pretty sure", the story itself will prove you wrong, so I won't add anything because that's the type of analysis learning that you can only get by failing to predict, like you are right now.
    Have a good reading, I'll just wait it out.