And I quickly read the comments, I see people only read the characters, so I'm going to talk about the STORY. I don't have much to add about the protagonists, the others pretty much said it all.
First, even though I have the worst luck (I'm literally the personification of Murphy's law), I'm not superstitious at all. So I found it as funny as ridiculous how the story and characters focus on this.
Second, too much sex. I can't even tell how many chapters are just sex, the whole book could have been at least 10chapters shorter.
Third etc, the art was pretty okay, translation is good, story is very okay-tiers, and I wasn't bored reading this (I still skipped the sex chapters because they didn't add anything to the story tho). There was some unnecessary (even gross) parts but heh... Perfection is nothing but a childish fantasy in our sad world.
And I quickly read the comments, I see people only read the characters, so I'm going to talk about the STORY. I don't have much to add about the protagonists, the others pretty much said it all.
First, even though I have the worst luck (I'm literally the personification of Murphy's law), I'm not superstitious at all. So I found it as funny as ridiculous how the story and characters focus on this.
Second, too much sex. I can't even tell how many chapters are just sex, the whole book could have been at least 10chapters shorter.
Third etc, the art was pretty okay, translation is good, story is very okay-tiers, and I wasn't bored reading this (I still skipped the sex chapters because they didn't add anything to the story tho).
There was some unnecessary (even gross) parts but heh... Perfection is nothing but a childish fantasy in our sad world.