I feel like because it's a oneshot, some parts were too rushed, and the way he liked him didn't feel convincing for me, unless its some fetish taste shit, however its good to read something unexpected ig, but didn't satisfy me much, it defo needed more chapters (i wanted to know more about the top, & how the fetish started) ending is realistic, you just can't be with someone like the bottom who doesn't value himself, & top is too messed up for love in my opinion, & it feels like its set in some cannibalism society like that one comment said, like no one is shocked that this is happening, no "wtf" reactions, overall its 2.5 stars at best, but I'm leaving it unrated
I feel like because it's a oneshot, some parts were too rushed, and the way he liked him didn't feel convincing for me, unless its some fetish taste shit, however its good to read something unexpected ig, but didn't satisfy me much, it defo needed more chapters (i wanted to know more about the top, & how the fetish started) ending is realistic, you just can't be with someone like the bottom who doesn't value himself, & top is too messed up for love in my opinion, & it feels like its set in some cannibalism society like that one comment said, like no one is shocked that this is happening, no "wtf" reactions, overall its 2.5 stars at best, but I'm leaving it unrated