Story kinda lose it charms as it progress

nero13rd April 10, 2025 3:49 pm

Hmm idk man, i don't think i'll recommend this to new readers.
Sure the beginning is interesting enough introducing the chars and plots etc
But when reach at the middle it's ok but i personally feel like it kinda dragging on stuff unnecessary
But near the end part even worse as the story just goes haywire and we barely see the side chars involved with the final arc
Like whats the point of introducing all these chars and create connection if they werent doing anything.
Not to mentioned the ending itself extremely rushed

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