This story just felt so rushed

Stwbrr1_J∆M April 9, 2025 11:02 am

There were so many things mentioned in the story, like how Mc transferred school, why mc or ml doesnt meet their parents, how mc's being targeted by his past school, ml getting into the yakuza, ml getting a girl pregnant and getting into dept. theres so many things that didn't get an explanation and the fact the story went so heavy real quick. It confused quite the people when i was reading through other's comments. Tbh it was such a great read for me but the fact that so much of the story felt like missings puzzles were off. Even though, it was great. I just hoped for more, more explanations, more character development, more scenes like romance and old friendships. I still love them though, i hope the girly pop that got pregnant was like, just a rumor or he wasnt the real father and also about his dept. His future too. I hope all that goes well. I want moreeeeeeee.....

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    qqudghk April 21, 2025 8:23 pm

    i feel you with wanting more from the story, because five chaps wasn't enough for everything that was going on
    it rlly felt more like a bunch of plot points that weren’t rlly fleshed out and well connected to each other