bar too low

ImUrJk April 9, 2025 2:33 am

This has so much potential but the narration is dragging it to the ground. The sudden change of Point of view and how the plot progresses, it’s all over the place. I’m quite disappointed off how it was done because half way through, I’m starting to get tired of reading because of how the story unfolds.

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    ImUrJk April 9, 2025 2:44 am

    Their character also sometimes does things that are so out of character. Like, Karel’s remarks about Sasya and the freaking deep throat scene were so unnecessary. If his character is really supposed to be like a puppy or head-over-heels in love, he wouldn’t have done that to someone he perceives as fragile and precious. That was just him being lustful, plain and simple. And Sasya asking how Lord Skar got his scars—as if he didn’t know he went to war? Like, girl, I thought you were smart. What do you mean by that?? ╥﹏╥ I don’t know, I think I’m dropping this because it’s starting to feel inconsistent and kind of dumb. The characters aren’t making sense anymore, and it’s getting hard to stay invested.

    Just ignore my username lol April 13, 2025 3:47 pm
    Their character also sometimes does things that are so out of character. Like, Karel’s remarks about Sasya and the freaking deep throat scene were so unnecessary. If his character is really supposed to be lik... ImUrJk

    I truly believe that since the very start they have showed us someone obsessed disguised as love, more than once I felt he was too intense and even more because of Sasya's reaction, so I think he was always the type of overly obsessed but it's true that the more I read the less sense everything has, I was so invested at the beginning but now I'm just trying to get to the end
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    Just ignore my username lol April 13, 2025 4:46 pm
    I truly believe that since the very start they have showed us someone obsessed disguised as love, more than once I felt he was too intense and even more because of Sasya's reaction, so I think he was always the... Just ignore my username lol

    You know what, I am on further chapters than I was before and I think I have a kind of different now

    quinnaezo April 19, 2025 4:24 am
    Their character also sometimes does things that are so out of character. Like, Karel’s remarks about Sasya and the freaking deep throat scene were so unnecessary. If his character is really supposed to be lik... ImUrJk

    No, I agree with you about the characters being inconsistent. There kind of just there and have traumatic stories that make you feel for them. Their love story doesn't make much sense either. I honestly just started hate reading after chapter 10 and I still can't get this stupid ass manhwa out of my head. Long story short, Karel's is love is based purely on his lust and Sasya's looks. Sue me if anyone disagrees. I'm winning though.