Their character also sometimes does things that are so out of character. Like, Karel’s remarks about Sasya and the freaking deep throat scene were so unnecessary. If his character is really supposed to be like a puppy or head-over-heels in love, he wouldn’t have done that to someone he perceives as fragile and precious. That was just him being lustful, plain and simple. And Sasya asking how Lord Skar got his scars—as if he didn’t know he went to war? Like, girl, I thought you were smart. What do you mean by that?? ╥﹏╥ I don’t know, I think I’m dropping this because it’s starting to feel inconsistent and kind of dumb. The characters aren’t making sense anymore, and it’s getting hard to stay invested.
This has so much potential but the narration is dragging it to the ground. The sudden change of Point of view and how the plot progresses, it’s all over the place. I’m quite disappointed off how it was done because half way through, I’m starting to get tired of reading because of how the story unfolds.