Hey guyyss, please write good comments sothis story gets good ratings, and ppl read it, look mine got removed and if you want you can copy paste it, some thing changed like how his bro is a lot nicer to him now but in his first life he didn't have all that, so yeah, it still stands, anyway, um, I really hate the bad comments by idiots there so please go ahead and spread how good this story is, cause I was censored by idk who! Bastards that's for sure!
"This is so unbelievably good!!! Edit from a comment I wrote cause kids don't know how to appreciate a well written character and plot.
He never harmed her, the top comment is weird. It's not even him but someone possessing his body who hurt her friends and family, he doesn't even understand what friends and family mean since he never had any, all his family did was ostracized him and harm him. Nobody ever was kind to him, not even the pseudo "kind" brother, Olive's brother too was mean and horrible towards him even sheathing his sword towards a kid. MC is the youngest, yet they treat him so badly knowing he never did all that and only got possessed by a ghost or whatever entity after the horrible abuse he kept going through. Servants steal his money and he lives in poverty as a child, all he knows is the taste of poison and betrayal, what else do you expect from this kid? The fact he has been so loving and sweet towards Olive and is doing his best despite all the hurt life gave him, he's definitely amazing. He's even asking for help to learn empathy, compassion and how to care for others, he is the best for me. No MC so far has ever tried so hard for their loved one/s, most of them already had everyone loving them or had everything prepared for them, they at least had money and connections while he has none. they had a good mother or smth, he didn't. they have good servants, he doesn't, with the way life has treated him, he is awesome. Edit: I commented this long ago but idk why mangago put it as "only visible to myself" and I'very been trying to share it again, it doesn't let me, hope this works this time TwT"
Hey guyyss, please write good comments sothis story gets good ratings, and ppl read it, look mine got removed and if you want you can copy paste it, some thing changed like how his bro is a lot nicer to him now but in his first life he didn't have all that, so yeah, it still stands, anyway, um, I really hate the bad comments by idiots there so please go ahead and spread how good this story is, cause I was censored by idk who! Bastards that's for sure!
"This is so unbelievably good!!!
Edit from a comment I wrote cause kids don't know how to appreciate a well written character and plot.
He never harmed her, the top comment is weird. It's not even him but someone possessing his body who hurt her friends and family, he doesn't even understand what friends and family mean since he never had any, all his family did was ostracized him and harm him. Nobody ever was kind to him, not even the pseudo "kind" brother, Olive's brother too was mean and horrible towards him even sheathing his sword towards a kid. MC is the youngest, yet they treat him so badly knowing he never did all that and only got possessed by a ghost or whatever entity after the horrible abuse he kept going through. Servants steal his money and he lives in poverty as a child, all he knows is the taste of poison and betrayal, what else do you expect from this kid? The fact he has been so loving and sweet towards Olive and is doing his best despite all the hurt life gave him, he's definitely amazing. He's even asking for help to learn empathy, compassion and how to care for others, he is the best for me. No MC so far has ever tried so hard for their loved one/s, most of them already had everyone loving them or had everything prepared for them, they at least had money and connections while he has none. they had a good mother or smth, he didn't. they have good servants, he doesn't, with the way life has treated him, he is awesome.
Edit: I commented this long ago but idk why mangago put it as "only visible to myself" and I'very been trying to share it again, it doesn't let me, hope this works this time TwT"