This is honestly a mess. The story, the dialogue, everything is just poorly written here. There isn’t a clear progression in the story. Like the mc hates the ml but then suddenly loves him the following chapter.. like how’d we get here!?!?(￣∇￣") Don’t get me wrong, I like these types of stories, mostly because of the regretting and chasing arc, however the execution here is just not giving. The dialogues are all over the place, like they keep going back and forth that it’s honestly confusing at times. Art-wise, it’s mid. It’s not the best, but def not the worst ..But still staying tho for the chasing arc(〜￣△￣)〜
This is honestly a mess. The story, the dialogue, everything is just poorly written here. There isn’t a clear progression in the story. Like the mc hates the ml but then suddenly loves him the following chapter.. like how’d we get here!?!?(￣∇￣") Don’t get me wrong, I like these types of stories, mostly because of the regretting and chasing arc, however the execution here is just not giving. The dialogues are all over the place, like they keep going back and forth that it’s honestly confusing at times. Art-wise, it’s mid. It’s not the best, but def not the worst ..But still staying tho for the chasing arc(〜￣△￣)〜