It was good until they changed the pace. I thought it was about family but they skimped out on them spending time with their daughter.
I. Did. Not. Like. Reading Karzel's love life. What the hell were they thinking skipping their teen years with their parents! I wanted to see the family bonding, not see my grandbaby getting married! I wasn't prepared! Also, why at 18/19 years?! You could've at least waited until they turned 20, you know! The FL and ML don't look like they aged at all and their daughter is still 12 years old so what's the rush!
Never thought that I hated the ending until I actually wrote it down. It was so good too, despite the plotholes, it was a rood read.... Until you ruined it by marrying my grandbabies THAT young. I am so disappointed.
It was good until they changed the pace. I thought it was about family but they skimped out on them spending time with their daughter.
I. Did. Not. Like. Reading Karzel's love life. What the hell were they thinking skipping their teen years with their parents! I wanted to see the family bonding, not see my grandbaby getting married! I wasn't prepared! Also, why at 18/19 years?! You could've at least waited until they turned 20, you know! The FL and ML don't look like they aged at all and their daughter is still 12 years old so what's the rush!
Never thought that I hated the ending until I actually wrote it down. It was so good too, despite the plotholes, it was a rood read.... Until you ruined it by marrying my grandbabies THAT young. I am so disappointed.