Loved tht he bottomed but not even a grunt? Girl Ik u'r a tank but Megatron moans more than u during spear impalement.. Also, though it has improved by a lot in the end
By the gods are the panel directions ungodly.
Almost a lot of the early pages felt like they were just being put into shapes that had no intentional meaning other than to make it look fancy... the panel buildups aren't felt like build-ups and the panel the panel build-ups were yknow... BUILDING UP TO, was made into a regular panel. No effect. No impact. Whatsoever. EXAMPLES. (1).The scene where Kento is spotted hanging out w his buddy was supposed to feel like he was caught in some act. (it should have been in it's own page as a buildup to him spotting Souta. ) (2).The next scene would be Souta running away from the place and Kento catching up to Souta and telling him that what he saw was a misunderstanding.(THIS SHOULD BE ITS OWN PAGE) Conclusion= they were not their own pages and were all just squirted in together in one page as if they had free will WHAT WERE THEY ONNNNN. There was also like a triangle shaped panel in there like WHATT HELP.
A comedic scene(the kiss scene with aoyama and Kento) should also be given it's own spotlight as the build-up to Kento's hair being pulled and looking up at Aoyama. THAT should have been in a bigger panel or in another page rather than it just being cast aside like a regular scene.
(I was a director for a film club and assisted on directing comic panels for my juniors and though they don't have the same principles, by the gods they should)
Maybe the scans were just small, that's forgiven. But panel direction and lineart make a huge difference on an impact a scene is trying to make.
Why am I crashing out about this manga tht's about cheating and miscomunication love tht for them tho go get ur rights
Loved tht he bottomed but not even a grunt? Girl Ik u'r a tank but Megatron moans more than u during spear impalement..
Also, though it has improved by a lot in the end
By the gods are the panel directions ungodly.
Almost a lot of the early pages felt like they were just being put into shapes that had no intentional meaning other than to make it look fancy... the panel buildups aren't felt like build-ups and the panel the panel build-ups were yknow... BUILDING UP TO, was made into a regular panel. No effect. No impact. Whatsoever.
EXAMPLES.
(1).The scene where Kento is spotted hanging out w his buddy was supposed to feel like he was caught in some act. (it should have been in it's own page as a buildup to him spotting Souta. )
(2).The next scene would be Souta running away from the place and Kento catching up to Souta and telling him that what he saw was a misunderstanding.(THIS SHOULD BE ITS OWN PAGE)
Conclusion= they were not their own pages and were all just squirted in together in one page as if they had free will WHAT WERE THEY ONNNNN. There was also like a triangle shaped panel in there like WHATT HELP.
A comedic scene(the kiss scene with aoyama and Kento) should also be given it's own spotlight as the build-up to Kento's hair being pulled and looking up at Aoyama. THAT should have been in a bigger panel or in another page rather than it just being cast aside like a regular scene.
(I was a director for a film club and assisted on directing comic panels for my juniors and though they don't have the same principles, by the gods they should)
Maybe the scans were just small, that's forgiven. But panel direction and lineart make a huge difference on an impact a scene is trying to make.
Why am I crashing out about this manga tht's about cheating and miscomunication love tht for them tho go get ur rights