This story was truly all tf over the place but I'm genuinely kind of intrigued by the world building (the body swapping, the politics, the neural comms, etc) but it's also clear that every detail is just to push forward the smutty plot??? lmaooo I'm not mad at it but why put together this creative plot/world only to completely butcher an actual set up and story. Wild. The other Gwendolyn stories seem a lot more organized and actually have, like, arcs. This could have been twice the length, easy.
This story was truly all tf over the place but I'm genuinely kind of intrigued by the world building (the body swapping, the politics, the neural comms, etc) but it's also clear that every detail is just to push forward the smutty plot??? lmaooo I'm not mad at it but why put together this creative plot/world only to completely butcher an actual set up and story. Wild. The other Gwendolyn stories seem a lot more organized and actually have, like, arcs. This could have been twice the length, easy.