I loved this so much! However there are a few aspects I didn't like much: first of all, this was a story in which I would have taken for granted a poly ending had it not been for the fact that I spoiled myself with the ending before I even started reading. BUT IT'S NOT POLY! TT I LOVE Gray as the male lead, I really do, but what about Ruel and Eden?? They really stole the show, such a pity (I didn't really care about Dane if not for the fact that he was hot, I'm sorry. I'm also feeling a bit petty about how he apparently let her go without showing any sign of redundance or remorse unlike Ruel and Eden) This would have been the perfect example of a poly that would make sense in that situation. Most of all: the ending in general felt SO abrupt. She was equally into each of them but suddenly BAM! We find out that not only she decided to leave them (ok, fair), but she chose Gray out of freaking nowhere when we didn't even see that much development between them to begin with (nor with the others but you get my point). I don't know, I would have loved to see it happen more gradually (it was probably due to the fact that it was originally an otome game and they had to condensate every route into a single storyline, I understand, but still...) An option could have been to have 4 different side stories of the possible endings, like the actual routes of the visual novel, to see how would end up had she chosen the others. But the poly option would have bern so much better :(
...Also... Come here. Listen. HEAR ME OUT. Don't y'all also think that Dana had so much potential as a love interest? ...No? Just me? Ok...
like i‘d say gray was more emotionally connected with her BUT i would‘ve LOVED a poly i just hope the author/artists will publish different routes ykwim?
!!Spoilers about the ending!!
I loved this so much! However there are a few aspects I didn't like much: first of all, this was a story in which I would have taken for granted a poly ending had it not been for the fact that I spoiled myself with the ending before I even started reading. BUT IT'S NOT POLY! TT
I LOVE Gray as the male lead, I really do, but what about Ruel and Eden?? They really stole the show, such a pity (I didn't really care about Dane if not for the fact that he was hot, I'm sorry. I'm also feeling a bit petty about how he apparently let her go without showing any sign of redundance or remorse unlike Ruel and Eden) This would have been the perfect example of a poly that would make sense in that situation.
Most of all: the ending in general felt SO abrupt. She was equally into each of them but suddenly BAM! We find out that not only she decided to leave them (ok, fair), but she chose Gray out of freaking nowhere when we didn't even see that much development between them to begin with (nor with the others but you get my point). I don't know, I would have loved to see it happen more gradually (it was probably due to the fact that it was originally an otome game and they had to condensate every route into a single storyline, I understand, but still...)
An option could have been to have 4 different side stories of the possible endings, like the actual routes of the visual novel, to see how would end up had she chosen the others. But the poly option would have bern so much better :(
...Also... Come here. Listen. HEAR ME OUT. Don't y'all also think that Dana had so much potential as a love interest? ...No? Just me? Ok...