Overall i think it s a good read and let s u imagine the details

Mikaela April 6, 2025 11:48 am

Story and art are good i like them. There are some scenes that lack details or sudden switching between jthe scenes with putting in much details between them. I get what the author might be trying to do by not filling the story with too much details and only dropping hints which is smth i like, Getting straight to important scenes or details, but sometimes u need those fillers to make reading smoother and the scene switch more comfortable. So i believe there s room for improvement. I ve seen worst.

There were few inconsistencies in the translation (specially pronouns but i know it can be confusing in chinese too) and a bit in the art style but nothing unrecognizable. I’m used to it specially in martial art novels so i m good.

Story pacing is also good and fast to read.

It might not be everyone s cup of tea but it s mine.

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    Mikaela April 6, 2025 11:50 am

    Edit:
    sudden switching between *the* scenes *without* putting in much details between them