I DEF THINK THIS WAS GREAT AND ESP THE ART + FLOW HAD ME ON MY TOES!!! but IDK ARGHHH gen no hate maybe i was just hella geeked on sleep deprivation but I really wish I felt more ache at the main couple? like don’t get me wrong I def fw with the dynamic and im all for the business yap smartness that was happening, but maybe bc it was the translations or smth but I feel like there weren’t enough vulnerability that made me really feel that yearn and pain? Referencing the shoulder dislocation chapters in specific. plus side note lowk the beginning of the ceo’s feelings towards lawyer was so hallway crush LMAO just thought it was kinda silly /pos
IDK I REALLY WISHED I LOVED THIS WHOLEHEARTEDLY BUT THERES JUST SOMETHING MISSING ARGHHHHHH
also this might just be me being picky but i feel like the ending was kinda rushed? like holy info dump in the last chapter LMAO and the kidnapping done by that gate keeper person lowk so corny plot convenience also off topic the chairman guy giving all those shares to his sugar baby is so LMAOO erm.. buddy... like i gen thought it would actually be given to his illegitimate son for more skib characterization #nohate #alllove
I DEF THINK THIS WAS GREAT AND ESP THE ART + FLOW HAD ME ON MY TOES!!! but IDK ARGHHH gen no hate maybe i was just hella geeked on sleep deprivation but I really wish I felt more ache at the main couple? like don’t get me wrong I def fw with the dynamic and im all for the business yap smartness that was happening, but maybe bc it was the translations or smth but I feel like there weren’t enough vulnerability that made me really feel that yearn and pain? Referencing the shoulder dislocation chapters in specific. plus side note lowk the beginning of the ceo’s feelings towards lawyer was so hallway crush LMAO just thought it was kinda silly /pos
IDK I REALLY WISHED I LOVED THIS WHOLEHEARTEDLY BUT THERES JUST SOMETHING MISSING ARGHHHHHH
also this might just be me being picky but i feel like the ending was kinda rushed? like holy info dump in the last chapter LMAO and the kidnapping done by that gate keeper person lowk so corny plot convenience also off topic the chairman guy giving all those shares to his sugar baby is so LMAOO erm.. buddy... like i gen thought it would actually be given to his illegitimate son for more skib characterization #nohate #alllove