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FUCK two paragraphs deleted because of emoji. Anyway, all in all, I'll give it 8.5/10. Would've been 9.2 had it fleshed out the ending more.
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FUCK two paragraphs deleted because of emoji. Anyway, all in all, I'll give it 8.5/10. Would've been 9.2 had it fleshed out the ending more.
...in a vacuum. But take a step back to the previous chapter and it felt like you jumped through a time machine. This story has ended. But it didn't feel finished.