On one hand, people dying like flies around MC is just sus af, it just doesn't really happen so I thought ffs, maybe don't let the "revenge" end on the other person's death (maybe just mentally break the other person or some shit), cuz it just gets to the point of asking why tf isn't shirayuki still not a suspect of at least one of the deaths? But on the other hand, not killing the mfs leads to a loose end and it just adds on to the fear that they'll come back, kinda like a mouse-cat chase, so like go kill them Shirayuki! My only qualm with the story so far is how the death "revenge" are kinda meh and how the deaths are just brushed off. Other than that, so far so good.
On one hand, people dying like flies around MC is just sus af, it just doesn't really happen so I thought ffs, maybe don't let the "revenge" end on the other person's death (maybe just mentally break the other person or some shit), cuz it just gets to the point of asking why tf isn't shirayuki still not a suspect of at least one of the deaths? But on the other hand, not killing the mfs leads to a loose end and it just adds on to the fear that they'll come back, kinda like a mouse-cat chase, so like go kill them Shirayuki! My only qualm with the story so far is how the death "revenge" are kinda meh and how the deaths are just brushed off. Other than that, so far so good.