Yow, first of all. Its my first time reading this kind of verse, I'm not sure if there is already existing nameverse thing so that actually made me confused and frustrated a lot of times haha. Its like they dropped thing whole nameverse that I dont know. (its not hard to understand but its nice if you already know how it works) Overall, honestly the pacing, i feel like its rush and the flow id say theres a room for improvement. For the ML, there are times where Im not sure how the author wants to portray his character - kinda all over, diff kinds of characteristics so yeah but hes still okay. I really like the part where they revealed the parents of MC. Its the best part and made me think that not everything is bad and there's always hope lol kinda feeling. 7.5/10
Yow, first of all. Its my first time reading this kind of verse, I'm not sure if there is already existing nameverse thing so that actually made me confused and frustrated a lot of times haha. Its like they dropped thing whole nameverse that I dont know. (its not hard to understand but its nice if you already know how it works) Overall, honestly the pacing, i feel like its rush and the flow id say theres a room for improvement. For the ML, there are times where Im not sure how the author wants to portray his character - kinda all over, diff kinds of characteristics so yeah but hes still okay. I really like the part where they revealed the parents of MC. Its the best part and made me think that not everything is bad and there's always hope lol kinda feeling. 7.5/10