The story somehow has potential but the writing is really bad like it is illogical or doesnt make sense
Chapter1 - So his only means to get intel from one night stands then distances from them? It's just logical that if you been trying to get intel from a hard to infiltrate city which seems allergic to giving info to detectives or cops is try to be of the person in that city, to build connections and relationships to eventually get intel. That's what most undercover people do. He also said he doesnt give his number duh it's common sense for undercover people who to have a secondary phone or fake phone and would never refuse getting connections coz they may need it in the future. lmao. He also met Eliseo in a sus situation yet he doesnt ask questions or investigate him? What's he doing there? Just sleeping around? lol Im about to write my other inputs for chapters 2,3 and 4 but tf it is so obvious already. Good read but written badly. Maybe that's the reason why it was dropped
The story somehow has potential but the writing is really bad like it is illogical or doesnt make sense
Chapter1 - So his only means to get intel from one night stands then distances from them? It's just logical that if you been trying to get intel from a hard to infiltrate city which seems allergic to giving info to detectives or cops is try to be of the person in that city, to build connections and relationships to eventually get intel. That's what most undercover people do. He also said he doesnt give his number duh it's common sense for undercover people who to have a secondary phone or fake phone and would never refuse getting connections coz they may need it in the future. lmao. He also met Eliseo in a sus situation yet he doesnt ask questions or investigate him? What's he doing there? Just sleeping around? lol
Im about to write my other inputs for chapters 2,3 and 4 but tf it is so obvious already. Good read but written badly. Maybe that's the reason why it was dropped