It's a good story but doesn't really reach it's potential in my opinion. 1. The SA at the start, if you want someone to trust you you don't tie them up in their sleep then finger them lol 2. I don't like that they didn't set up a safe word right away. The seme talked a lot of shit to not actually do one of the most important things in BDSM off the bat. Plus the consent issue at the beginning. 3. I wished the author showed more aftercare. Idk I just love aftercare with the lovey dovey stuff, would've been cool to see a sub drop because uke kept pushing himself too. But that's just something I'd like to see not something that needs to be fixed lol
Again this is just my personal opinion on how I would've like the story to be a 5/5 if you chill with SA and shi like that, that's fine I'm not judging lol
It's a good story but doesn't really reach it's potential in my opinion.
1. The SA at the start, if you want someone to trust you you don't tie them up in their sleep then finger them lol
2. I don't like that they didn't set up a safe word right away. The seme talked a lot of shit to not actually do one of the most important things in BDSM off the bat. Plus the consent issue at the beginning.
3. I wished the author showed more aftercare. Idk I just love aftercare with the lovey dovey stuff, would've been cool to see a sub drop because uke kept pushing himself too. But that's just something I'd like to see not something that needs to be fixed lol
Again this is just my personal opinion on how I would've like the story to be a 5/5 if you chill with SA and shi like that, that's fine I'm not judging lol