I just started reading and I have to say: Somehow the writing feels very strange.
The character behavior feels quite inconsistent, random at times even and the affection from the MC towards the ML seems rather forced or random as well. As if the author didn't quite know how to make the transition to the next step they had put in the script of this story.
Both characters aren't really likable or dislikable per se, so I'm not sure if this'll be interesting on the long run. It just feels off in quite a few ways and doesn't really have that hook factor as much as I thought it could have.
I'll give it some more chapters but so far I'm not really at the point to add it to my 'Reading' list to get updates. I hope it gets better tho. XD
EDIT: Sadly dropping this. The inconsistent behavior stays and the MC basically excuses every bad behavior of the ML by a simply touch to which he turns into a blushy shoujo maiden. Just not my thing, but maybe other people will like it.
I just started reading and I have to say: Somehow the writing feels very strange.
The character behavior feels quite inconsistent, random at times even and the affection from the MC towards the ML seems rather forced or random as well.
As if the author didn't quite know how to make the transition to the next step they had put in the script of this story.
Both characters aren't really likable or dislikable per se, so I'm not sure if this'll be interesting on the long run. It just feels off in quite a few ways and doesn't really have that hook factor as much as I thought it could have.
I'll give it some more chapters but so far I'm not really at the point to add it to my 'Reading' list to get updates. I hope it gets better tho. XD
EDIT: Sadly dropping this. The inconsistent behavior stays and the MC basically excuses every bad behavior of the ML by a simply touch to which he turns into a blushy shoujo maiden.
Just not my thing, but maybe other people will like it.