eh

Ray April 1, 2025 5:53 am

i feel like towards the middle the story was rushed A LOT, there feels like there’s still more left to unpack. asharte was kind and said she’d forgive noah one day and i feel like out of all three of her family members he was the most likely to reconcile somewhat with her. it was so good at first i feel like it got built up to this big major thing just to rush through everything. especially the side stories? like there could’ve been SO much with that.

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