In first 10 chapters I have high hopes since the plot run fast at reasonable pace. After it reach the end of short version (where MC killed that man) , it’s not going anywhere. 26 chapters and the plot is moving like 10% above the short ver. with only 5 chapters.
MC has trauma, been in toxic relationships we get it. But at least properly explored the wounds or writing the damn plot. Not just porn after porn.
In first 10 chapters I have high hopes since the plot run fast at reasonable pace. After it reach the end of short version (where MC killed that man) , it’s not going anywhere. 26 chapters and the plot is moving like 10% above the short ver. with only 5 chapters.
MC has trauma, been in toxic relationships we get it. But at least properly explored the wounds or writing the damn plot. Not just porn after porn.