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2. Development stage
No hate to the author tho. I think the potential IS there... A LOT of other things were great. It's just the romance part of the story.
I think in another genre, the author will flourish. Like action and drama
In all honesty, I hated this bullshit. There's just so many fucking plot holes...Like the world building and the conflict was there, but the whole fucking point was the romance... Yet the author failed to make it worthwhile.
1.The ml was literally head over heels for the dead twin(R)
2. The whole develop stage wasn't even there!!! Mc fell in love IMMEDIATELY
3. Another!! The ml wasn't even over the dead twin (R) in one chapter, but he's literally confessing his feelings for mc the next chapter!!!!! WTHHH?!