
It's their intimate dynamic that really throws me off! D/s dynamics are completely valid, but I think it's very unfair of Ash to pull karlyle along into this dynamic with no real negotiation, ability to withdraw consent or real conversation about what karlyle wants. Yes, we get to hear karlyle's thoughts, but there's never really any point where he openly discusses his fantasies, likes (contra dislikes and limits) with ash – there's similarly no real point where Karlyle's limits have been respected. Honestly, almost all of the sex is initiated by Ash, and this whole punishment act is just not negotiated enough, they're not practicing safe and consensual kink, imo...
I really don't like the seme in this novel for some reason which I'm not exactly able to pinpoint. It may be because I think he should have suffered more or maybe because I think his smiling face looks fake or maybe cause I think he is a little manipulative