Art is 80, story is 90, pacing is 70, and the ending is 40.

Frosche79 April 9, 2025 7:42 pm

The art needs more fixing, there are almost no facial expressions at all so I hope the artist will improve on that in future works.

But other than that, the character designs are fabulous. And the story is just muah . I love how the desserts are made and I had to literally wipe the drool from my mouth.

The story is good but I feel like it's been rushed so I can't process it yet, but it's good beyond that.

But the thing I hate most is that FL has to leave her freedom behind for the sake of being with her man.

I really, REALLY hate the throne, and the idea of being in one. I'm on teams Duke, Marquis, Count, or even Viscount and Baron. Any of them but a King or an Emperor!

If I ever get in the shoes of every FL character in the same genre, I would say "Eff off to the Royal family" and run to the other side of the world. It just feels so troublesome to be in the royal/imperial family. Too much responsibility and too many things to worry about. Like, I want my freedom, man!

It's sad that FL turned on her dream to be with her man but I understand that. The ML is worthy of her and he's a precious little thing so I suppose it's all good.

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