i guess this story also suffer the same issue like amateur japanese webnovel. it used multiple POV and flashbacks in a way that slog down the overall pace. you will get into chapter 50 and realize most things happen in narrative and characters monologues their past and different characters narrate the same plot again and again.
i always find it a slog to read such story despite the amazing idea and plot. yeah the delivery and pace need to get used to but i have no patience sorry. they usually are better when adapted to manga because of the illustration but it will still slow you can see.
i guess this story also suffer the same issue like amateur japanese webnovel. it used multiple POV and flashbacks in a way that slog down the overall pace. you will get into chapter 50 and realize most things happen in narrative and characters monologues their past and different characters narrate the same plot again and again.
i always find it a slog to read such story despite the amazing idea and plot. yeah the delivery and pace need to get used to but i have no patience sorry. they usually are better when adapted to manga because of the illustration but it will still slow you can see.