i only read the first two chapters, but what the actual fuck. the way this author portray...

Since when has yaoi of all things ever cared about being realistic when it came to serious topics lol

Like just laugh and go this isn’t as deep as you think it is

oh gtfo with that shit i never said its deep, its just fucked up.
authors usually commit to what they do.
when you have a goofy/downplayed portrayal of rape there is an equally bad unrealistic after math that follows- idgaf about stories like that, they just mildly piss me off, not my type of fiction.

but here you got a brutal portrayal of rape with a serious tone and and the aftermath had a compete tone shift.
narrative integrity hardly exists in yaoi, but its usually never this bad .

yeah thats kinda the point

wdym

Again, you’re looking too deep into this. Remember, this is just fiction— people read shit like this to get off, not to act all Derridean and dissect the hidden meaning and problematics behind it. Unclench and breathe, babes

this manwha isnt meant to represent healthy relationships

@Brotha Calm
nice cop out answer lol

(and its funny how you start up shit under my comment just to block me. if you cant handle opinions, dont start a discussion on someone elses comment.)

no shit, Sherlock

W ragebait

then why r u complaining

it would help if you actually read what i wrote

i rly dont think theres a tone shift youve only read the two first chapters anyways so uh

i only read in whole the first 2 chapters, but i did read the beginning of the 3rd chapter and thats were the tone shift is at. (for some reason i thought that was in the end of 2nd chapter)
it went from brutal rape to i think im gay all cheery and shit, and i found that very jarring.

Literally most female toxic yaoi authors treat rape as a fetish and a kink, it's so fucked up n disgusting.

"It's a fictional story" doesn't make it any better ngl

“It doesn’t make it any better” do you hear yourself? It does actually make it better when no one is getting hurt. Real life people getting hurt and having to deal with it is, indeed, worse than 2 fake dolls on a screen playing actor. If it’s not for you, lucky, scroll and go read what suits you.