This wasn't "fast paced", per se, it was more like there were a lot of moments that seemed...

w_iju March 28, 2025 1:34 pm

This wasn't "fast paced", per se, it was more like there were a lot of moments that seemed to be "cut off"-- like we're getting glimpses into what could have been a really intricate story. As it stand though, I still like it. Confusing storytelling is something I really enjoy reading actually, so tbh I'm not bothered at all by "what has been cut off" from the storyline ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ although it does make the more lovey-dovey(?) scenes with these two seem a bit out of place. I can see their dynamic working, but it also seems like they've been together for longer than they actually have? In a way.

There is a very somber vibe in this one, too, and I gotta say I really enjoy it. The author can really nail unsettling scenes! While Kabukichou Bad Trip was a much healthier couple, I'd love to see Nagisa-sensei try to make an "off-putting", maybe obsessive couple. It'd be sooo interesting...

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