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To be fair thou, they give reasonable causes to all of Renato's moments of weakness, and he even overcomes them and the narrative posits them as one of the many problems he has to face.. very good writing imo
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To be fair thou, they give reasonable causes to all of Renato's moments of weakness, and he even overcomes them and the narrative posits them as one of the many problems he has to face.. very good writing imo
I usually get frustrated with weak and spineless main characters, even in regression stories, but I just can’t bring myself to hate Renato. Seeing everything he’s been through and how hard he’s trying makes me root for him instead!!!! Even when he asks for help from Kalid, it doesn’t feel like there’s a power imbalance because the male lead is written so humanly—he’s not some all-knowing, perfectly composed character. Plus points bec I am loving his facial expressions fr!!!
Even in the intimate moments—the small smut scenes—everything just makes me gush. I can’t help but root for both of them!
The pacing and writing are so well done. this story definitely deserves more than just a 9.2. At the very least, it should be a 9.5 or 9.6!